I loved this!! Everything about it worked for me. I particularly liked the shot where you were over Delainey's shoulder and the camera movement wasn't steady. It felt real and honest. Awesome job!!
Your music choice was absolutely perfect for this emotion. I also really enjoyed the focus in, wide shot towards the end with the girl standing on the hill. That's where I really felt the "loneliness" emotion!
Your music choice was very fitting for this video, changing clips with the beat of the piano made the transitions very smooth. The camera movements were smooth, while you were following her.
Great job with the framing of each shot. Every aspect showed the emotion of loneliness. There were a couple shots that seemed shaky, but not enough to throw it off. Good job!
Beautiful shots, great choice of music. Wonderful transitions. Loved the short sided shot of her. The jagged movement in some of the shots made it feel more scared or paranoid than lonely.
This worked really well however, there was one transition that was a long fade and made me think that the video was over until it kept going. Just a little distracting. However, the racked focus and close ups of the tall grasses were great.
A lot of nice editing to the soundtrack. Loved the powerful imagery.
ReplyDeleteI loved this!! Everything about it worked for me. I particularly liked the shot where you were over Delainey's shoulder and the camera movement wasn't steady. It felt real and honest. Awesome job!!
ReplyDeletevery nice close up shots. I enjoyed seeing the raindrops dripping from that metal pipe.
ReplyDeleteThis was a spot-on portrayal of loneliness. Great job!
ReplyDeleteVery nice job, i really liked the camera movements and the the close up shots.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery was very nice, I could really feel the emotion in the video from beginning to end.
ReplyDeleteYour music choice was absolutely perfect for this emotion. I also really enjoyed the focus in, wide shot towards the end with the girl standing on the hill. That's where I really felt the "loneliness" emotion!
ReplyDeleteYou created very nice rhythm with your cuts. I also enjoyed the nice wide shots with the long focus and fades. Very fitting.
ReplyDeleteVery good work! Loneliness was very well portrayed and I liked the music and acting
ReplyDeleteYour music choice was very fitting for this video, changing clips with the beat of the piano made the transitions very smooth. The camera movements were smooth, while you were following her.
ReplyDeleteIn the beginning, how you zoomed in on the talent was very productive in the comprehension of your emotion.
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the framing of each shot. Every aspect showed the emotion of loneliness. There were a couple shots that seemed shaky, but not enough to throw it off. Good job!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful shots, great choice of music. Wonderful transitions. Loved the short sided shot of her. The jagged movement in some of the shots made it feel more scared or paranoid than lonely.
ReplyDeleteThis worked really well however, there was one transition that was a long fade and made me think that the video was over until it kept going. Just a little distracting. However, the racked focus and close ups of the tall grasses were great.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a great video and had great editing! The fading out really adds to the feel of the video!
ReplyDeleteI will be sending this on for broadcast on WNIT's Arts Codec program. Great work!
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